Yeahhhhhhhh! yes the first one …..
For which i had been waiting for is finally with me……
The Perfect Poet award at Jingle’s Thursday Poets rally for week 13…..
I m very happy tat I m honoured last week with this much dreamed award!
I thank Jingle and all my other Poet friends for encouraging me to write more and thank you all for your love and support! I love you all π
And I nominate Wordwand for this weeks award…
And here comes my poem for this week’s rally…
Enjoy!
I m Sorry!
_________
I never dreamed about this all..
I never thought you will make me fall
I was never ready for this pain
I didnβt mean for it to happen
You were fooling me and I let you do
Is this the reward for loving you
may be doing what you did was wrong,
may be doing what I will do is right
I wish I could mend it and make it alright
But all I can do is get drunk tonight
At the end of the day,
only one thing left to say:
I m sorry!
I m sorry….
Now go away.
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smooth run,
i love it!
thank you for such a beautiful job!
Happy Thursday!
π
CONGRATULATIONS!
Well deserved, Vishu.
Do continue with the wonderful work.
Love your poem especially the ENDING.
Get to break loose.
hugs
shakira
Thanx a lot shakira…..
Thanx for being so supportive and encouraging….
Yup break loose ending… and eventually an Happy ending….
Keep smiling dear π
you are cool,
you do things for a good reason,
no sorry, referring to lines in your poem.
beautiful lines,
it falls right into the perfect place!
Thank you very much jingle….
You are the greatest motivator for all of us…..
your comment means a lot for every one of us…..
thanx for being there for us….
Love u….. π
Hope that you have fun visiting some fresh poets.
let me know after you are done so that I mark you as ready.
π
keep your spirits high,
you are valued and appreciated.
yup i m and i will….
thanx π
awards for you.
Thank you Ji
you are such a sweet heart π
now go away…the perfect end….congrats on the the perfect poet award!
ohh! brain… good to hear it from a awesome poet as u.
Thank you friend and keep visiting π
and keep smiling too π
nicely put, great poem
Thanx dear…. and i liked ur poem too… all abt bravery and will to win…..
keep smiling… keep visiting π
this is really beautiful and sad. hope its not real.
you very much deserve that award.
will get more of them.
with warmest affections,
Thank you sooo much dear, u r the most supportive blogger friend.
I thank u for this love, support and care….. from the bottom my heart.
and shubho nabobarsho…….
And thank u for those wonderful awards which u gave away to all of us on the eve of New year……
Keep smiling π
aawww… sad sad likh diya π¦
oi lekin dil tod diyaa tho darru se dosti kyu kar li
usko paaro aur khud ko DevD samajli π
hmmpff.. x( nalayak..
no drinking only loving π
you can check my poem at:
Thanx meghna…..
aapke comments toh chamktey hue din mein taare dikhne ke barabar hai… sirf khusnaseebooo ko ke nazar aatey hai….
lolz…..
and mujhe devD hona swikaar hai… lekin uss kambakhat ko paaro ke naam se naa bulaao… ye paroo ki tauheen hogi….
paaro toh bechari wafadaar thi lekin ye toh bewafaa nikli….
nahi…. abb mera jeena aur peena .. ek hi baraabar hai….. lolz
thanx for the support dear! and keep visiting!
The feeling is obvious in this writing. Keep it up. π
Thanx dear… i m happy tat u liked it…
thanx for stopping by and writing in… keep visiting π
i like it! π
Thanx….. π
keep visiting…..
Very heartfelt and sad. Powerful.
ohhh! not so sad…. atleast i got rid of her! so its kinda sad-HAPPY!
thanx dear for writing in!
π
a lovely poem Vishu.well sequenced poem, well rhymed.the final line is a killer.thanks for nominating me , you’re a sweet blogger and friend.
Thank you dear for supporting me with ur comments!
and thank you for sharing tat wonderful poem on ur blog…..
Keep smiling… π
congrats for the award
may lots and lots come your way
loved your expression in your poem
Thank you dear… i m happy tat you liked it!
Keep visiting…
and keep smiling π
i’m sorry too, that love can be so cruel… π
Yup at times it can be…
thanx for visiting and keep visiting… π
best poet ever,
you got all three awards.
thank you for the valuable contribution!
ohh! thank you jingle… u r the sweetest!
sorry to disturb you.I’ve got awards for you.
http://wordwand.wordpress.com/
Thank you wordwand and congrats for the perfect poet and all other awards too….:)
well you avoided my question π¦
I m sorry dear! but i dint avoid your question….
u ask me tat is tat real?
yes dear tat is real story, real emotions, but not recent one!
it happened 2 yrs ago… on the date 18th april…
so tomorrow i will kind of celebrate my freedom anniversary…
π
you are cool on that math solution,
outstanding thinking….
yup! all my life struggled with maths…. and became an engineer …. π
you are an exciting spirit in our community,
I am happy for everything you do.
Best wishes for you and your future,
Happy Saturday1
You Deserve The Best!
π
math award plus other awards for you.
Happy Sunday!
drinking can never be a solution to any pain. life is too beautiful to waste after a person who doesnot cares about you. too beautiful and given only once.
let me know when i am crossing my limit.
no dear…. u are a friend…and there is no limit to friendship in my life!
U say wat ever you want! I kno u will never go wrong!
and yes! life is beautiful…… and you kno wat? “alcohol is not the solution, but it helps to forget the question “…lolz jus joking
yes alcohol is not good and not the rite way!….. i learned my lessons abt alcohol in the past, and it has been 2 yrs nw, i m away frm it! π π
The hang over is still on ha? hang over of love…. but it’s ok haar jeet toh har field mein lagi rehati hai… Sachin 0 (zero) pe out ho sakata hai, Shahid ko Kareena chhod sakati hai…. toh tu kya cheej hai bhai…. just make all thing clear nd move on… u reminded me the song..
“set me free why don’t you baby
get out my life why don’t you baby
b’z u don’t really love me
you just keep me hanging on”
find humor in your tragedy & u will be fine
laugh at yourself… tat’s the great remedy for being happy… in short be little nirlajj (shameless).. b +ve
i think i have wasted lot of my valuable time in office… so bye bye.. keep writing, be happy… at least until we (ur family) are here (on earth) to nurture you… smile π
I dint understand ur last line!
wat did u mean by tat!
I can very well take care of my self!
And i m happy sister!
It was jus i was thinking of tat whole incident and wrote down this poem!
no hang over n all.
And dont u kno i m nirlajj…. bachpan se!
Sis, keep writing in.
Keep smiling π
i don’t know brother.. may be i m over reacting… sorry…
thats a good boy. π
glad to know that you have walked away from it. stay away too.
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“I’m sorry…now go away”…at least if she felt you caused any harm, you are sorry about it which is polite enough. but the bottom line is “now go away”…I say that a lot.
you are given three award from the post from me.
thanks for the invaluable support!
@Ji –
Good choice, he deserves it!
It’s really a touching one….
Simply Awesome… Great JOB !!!
hey thankyou seniorita!
I am happy u liked it!
keep visiting as I m making an come back on 18th!